Fiction Editor Portfolio
Helping fiction authors strengthen their stories while protecting the voice that makes each book unique.
As a professional fiction editor, I work closely with authors to strengthen structure, sharpen pacing and elevate storytelling across crime, thriller and romance genres.
Here are a few of the books I have been lucky enough to work on. These are all from private clients, although I have worked on many others for various publishers.
Working closely with authors allows me to understand their vision and help them create stories that resonate with readers.
Every Manuscript Has Its Own Story
From thrilling mysteries to heart-warming romance, each project brings its own creative challenges and opportunities.
My role is to bring professional editorial insight to the work while respecting the author's original vision and individual voice.
Selected Client Work
A selection of fiction projects, the editorial support provided and feedback from the authors I've had the pleasure of working with.
Dawn Knox
Dawn Knox is an award-winning author who writes captivating historical romance novels that transport readers to different eras filled with passion and intrigue.
I have been lucky enough to collaborate with Dawn on nine books in total, including all the delightful instalments of the Lady Amelia Saga series, which have garnered a dedicated following.
"Wendy, thank you so much for all your suggestions and comments on my novels, they were so insightful. I'm certainly better at editing my own work now!"DAWN KNOX
Charlie Bravo
Charlie Bravo is a prolific writer who has crafted over fifty novels.
I was asked to review a story based in London because Charlie, who is from the United States, wanted feedback on local details.
Although he had visited for research purposes, I was able to advise on London geography, colloquialisms and word choices to strengthen authenticity.
"Wendy did an amazing job with this project. I needed some in-depth feedback on a tight deadline and she delivered more than I expected. She beat the deadline, was great in her communication and her professional feedback helped me turn the story into the best version of itself. Wendy definitely exceeded my expectations."CHARLIE BRAVO
Saul Ben
It takes courage for an experienced author to put their work forward to be examined word by word.
The Forensic 500 process helps identify a writer's personal habits and opens a dialogue about different writing styles and techniques.
Even accomplished writers can discover new ways to strengthen their craft through detailed editorial feedback.
"Wendy, forgive me if I go a bit gushy. But thanks so much for those incredibly insightful comments… I feel like I've just been given a deep tissue massage! I really appreciate it."SAUL BEN
Jeff Mullen
Jeff was a first-time author who needed help getting his manuscript ready for publishing.
I examined the main story elements, including structure, plot points, settings, pacing, voice, character motivation and other important narrative details.
I provided a twelve-page document with comments and suggestions on areas needing improvement, alongside specific feedback within the manuscript using Track Changes in Word.
"I could tell right away that we would work well together… You've given me many excellent suggestions to improve my book, always couched professionally and encouragingly."JEFF MULLEN
My Approach to Fiction Editing
Every manuscript is different. Some authors need deep structural guidance, while others require careful line refinement or strategic feedback before submission.
My role as a fiction editor is not to rewrite your voice, but to refine it.
I focus on pacing, character motivation, narrative tension and emotional payoff, helping readers stay engaged from the opening chapter to the final page.
My feedback is detailed, constructive and designed to move your book closer to professional publication standards.
What Matters in Every Manuscript
- Preserving the author's individual voice
- Strengthening plot and narrative structure
- Improving pacing and reader engagement
- Developing believable characters
- Building tension and emotional impact
- Providing constructive, actionable feedback
Explore Fiction Editing Services
The right editorial service depends on the stage of your manuscript and the kind of support you need.
Manuscript Evaluation
A detailed assessment of your manuscript's strengths, weaknesses and opportunities for improvement.
Explore Manuscript Evaluation →Full Developmental Edit
In-depth structural feedback on plot, pacing, character development and reader impact.
Explore Developmental Editing →Proofreading
A final editorial check to help prepare your manuscript for publication.
Explore Proofreading →Want This Level of Support for Your Book?
If you're looking for a dedicated fiction editor who understands both commercial expectations and creative integrity, I would love to hear about your manuscript.